Oh thanks, I actually visited your melon farm and apartment and sent you a message in game. It was a great view, but sadly I missed the landing spot.

So there is a plot of land that I have seen on the world map that is fairly close to the edge but looks quite good to build on, assuming that there are no people who have laid claim to it, what exactly are the rules in coming close to the edge of the server borders? Are players not aloud to be within rendering distance of the edge or are they just not aloud to cross the edge? Sorry if this is in the wrong area / question already answered I couldn't find an answer for this on the wiki/forum.

Thanks a lot for the market tip! and yeah I just spent the past 10/15 minutes bookmarking all the necessary wiki links I may need during play haha <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f913.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":geek:">:geek:</object> and I gotta check out that epic design, hopefully someone screen grabbed it and threw it on the forums

Okay, jumped on the server really quick after I got approved, Wooo Hooo! Afterwards I ended up realizing that there are a ton a new commands and a slightly different shop system than what I am used to from other servers, this is not a problem, but more of a realization that I need to read up on the forums about the commands a little bit before I get started with my endeavor in the server. This is slightly off topic as well, but I love the theme of the holidays going in the spawn town, is that dynamically changing through the year or did I happen to start off in the right time for the area to make sense?

I thought it was really good, it ends on a nice cliff hanger and has very good depth in the two characters in a short period, and there is room to develop and draw out the plot to create suspense within the stories' framework. Maybe you could introduce a supporting character such as the person on the phone with Kathy to draw out more information and turn it into a larger piece. That is if you want to construct more on to this plot. If not then it is a very good short story nonetheless.